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Peregrine
October 2nd, 2004, 06:25 PM
Not as technical as metal, but not exactly hxc, so i guess its metalcore. Idk, genres aren't my strong point.

Me and a friend have thrown around talks about forming a band and such, but we are lacking other band members and talent. I still make up little riffs here and there, and I have written a lot of poems/songs. So, I make up some semieasy riffs and apply it to a song. I haven't actually recorded one in a while, and I think this is my "best." If you've heard my DMHP stuff, it sounds similiar to that, because I use the same vocals/distortion/ and guitar tuning, but its quite different, the lyrics have some substance (even though you prolly dont understand any of it, woo) and I try to make the guitarwork slightly better than DMHP, lol. And the recording is god-awful. Go Microsoft Sound Recorder!

It's quite long, 10 minutes or so, (I got into a groove or something) and just consists of me on vox and my heavily distorted bass guitar. And this is my first take, so there's lots of mistimings and general messups. (I don't have a metronome or drum machine) If I ever did form a band, it might sound something like this. (Granted, with more practice and other instruments) I'm just wondering if you'd listen to something like this. (I know some of you will hate it by default, heh) Comments are welcome, bash away too, I won't care too terribly much.

Download Here (http://www.theqhost.com/sites/pere/Chrome Casket.mp3)

Nine
October 2nd, 2004, 07:57 PM
you're right that is crappy.

YourFavoriteWeapon
October 2nd, 2004, 07:58 PM
you and wrathchild should start a band

sd-
October 2nd, 2004, 08:16 PM
Well uh... it certainly is creative?

ALieN
October 2nd, 2004, 08:27 PM
..wow

Peregrine
October 2nd, 2004, 09:22 PM
yeah, I figured it'd be mostly (or all) negative comments. :D

solidstrife
October 2nd, 2004, 11:00 PM
i'll be in your band

WrathChild
October 3rd, 2004, 01:10 AM
you and wrathchild should start a band

Mine was a joke. An intentional joke.

goldplatypus
October 3rd, 2004, 09:00 PM
i think the song is funny :(

jerriko
October 4th, 2004, 06:36 AM
Need a Guitarist playing Pinch Harmonics, and someone playing Drums most likely with Double Bass.

Alex Dark
October 5th, 2004, 08:21 PM
Dude you guys don't make fun of him, he's really talented!

Peregrine
October 5th, 2004, 09:42 PM
Dude you guys don't make fun of him, he's really talented!

huh? Yeah, its the internet, so, I assume that's sarcastic, but if it's not... Thanks, I guess, lol.

Regarding jerikko's comment: Yeah, If there was other instruments playing it'd be a lot better, and if the recording was better it'd be better as well. My friend liked it, so Idk, maybe one day the band will be formed (and the end of the world will be upon us.)